將這些表達以關鍵詞的形式列出：如： when… 或者it is …
2.轉化主題句：
1)有些人持反對意見- Others hold the opposite view。
理由：1.main task- academic study, 2.society complex- cheated
2)有些人贊成大學生做兼職- hold the positive view
理由：1.ease financial burden 2.enrich experience
3)我的看法- both right ……。
3.擴展成文
例文如下：
It can be noticed that an increasing number of college students are doing part-time jobs in their free time. However, people’ opinions on this issue vary greatly. Some hold the opposite view. Firstly, they claim that it is academic pursuit that is college students’ primary task. Secondly, owing to the complexity of the society, students may be easily cheated
Others, on the contrary, are of students’ part-time jobs. They argue that by doing part-time jobs, students can earn a little money to ease their parents’ financial burden. Besides, they believe that part-time jobs enable them to enrich their personal experience and broaden their horizons. Thus, they can acquire the knowledge which can not be obtained in campus。
Who is right? I think both sides have something right. Actually, part-time jobs can be viewed as a two-edged sword, which presents us both benefits and troubles. But we should not give up for fear of choking. The best policy, as I see it, is to maximize their advantages and minimize their unhealthy influences, so that they can benefit us in a better way. (最后一段屬四、六級模板套用)。
最后，請檢查基本語音錯誤：1.單詞拼寫，2.時態，3.單復數，4.關聯詞
